High school art class

...some more draft verse for the Barbecue verse novel idea.

This is first person point of view and I am thinking that doing verse in first person, second person and third person may be a way into free indirect discourse lyric in verse novels.

What ever; I would freak if a high school art student said this to me.



HIGH SCHOOL ART CLASS FIGURE DRAWING (title to be deleted)


it was my art class home work
draw a nude figure of same gender
male for me that is me being male

my teacher had a criticism on me
when presenting my drawing saying
his penis is too big that is wrong

No I said that is my boy friend
and I really do know how big he is
having taken it inside many times